rhythm

Try saying out loud, “Thoughts, ramblings, ideas.”

Now say, “Ramblings and thoughts and ideas.” 

Did you notice how much more smoothly the second one flows?  “Ramblings and thoughts and ideas.”  A nice triple meter.  Could write a waltz to that.

“Ideas and thoughts and ramblings” also flows nicely, though a bit more squarely because this one is in a duple meter, march-like. 

Which is why I chose “Thoughts, ramblings, ideas” – though I wasn’t aware of it at first.  “Thoughts, ramblings, ideas” does not flow.  It makes you pause slightly before “ramblings”.  My thoughts don’t flow nicely.  They arrive, twirl around, come to a screeching halt, stutter, linger, insist, vanish, and reappear.

I love language.

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